Workshop

STRUCTURE

1.Attitude toward the news: 

(1) you show a phenomenon, but whats your real angle in this article~?

(2)you can add more in your conclusion

(3)then maybe you can show your advise at the last paragraph
à I would try to describe more about my being helpless.
2.The direction of the article:
(1) "if you creators of FB dont try to solve the problem then we will resist to use"

(2)although FB is convenient and  fashion, we are easily be hacked. we should not put too much private documents on it

(3)you should at least do your best to protect your privacy

(4)the problem of FB is that this platform is not so reliable since it can easily "sell" your privacy

(5)you can also write some problems of FB like it will make the hard sell for users to add the clubs when they detect which types of thing that users are interested in reveal

àPrivacy would be a huge range，I would try to discuss HOW we resist it.

(1)DON;T DOWNLOAD FROM some strange website

(2)change the code frequently

(3)remember to login out in outside,or make the code harder

(4) i know that fb can email you when ur account was used at other place,

but we still can log in on two computers if these two computers are in the same area