Malicious marketing practices 2.2

Facebook is the most popular social website in this generation, when its utilization rate grows up, the number of ads grow up. And we start feeling being disturbed about these annoying ads, however, the ads always have new methods to pop up in front of us. One method is that online games created at least hundreds of pages or profiles and posted many comments on famous people’s pages. One of the most popular painters, Cherng’s, even drew a picture to express his being helpless. 

The above is not the worst, shopping groups should win the first prize, and how it works is that one person was hacked and added all his friends into the shopping groups, and some more malicious would make the people who hd been added keep add his friend into it. Jericho Huang, a twenty-year-old student in National Chiayi University, was hacked in these days and he told me when he found out he had been hacked, he changed all his codes immediately, however, the hacker didn't give up and kept hacked him. "You know what? We could log in Facebook on many computers at the same time. I heard this shocking news from my friend." he said.

Both the marketing practices I mentioned maybe publicize their product or stores successfully, but these methods really enrage consumers.

Shopping Groups on Facebook 2.1

Some people would be haked and added all his friends into these shopping groups.

We the victim also came up the method to resist them.

http://www.ettoday.net/news/20130328/184693.htm

And this method would raise the question of privacy.

Will the Dangerous Cases Influence International Students' Will to Study in Taiwan?

 Recently, more and more students choose to study abroad, and it raises a serious question about safety of exchanged students. It is possible for everyone to face these personal safety problems such as being targets of criminals; however, international students have more chances because of their foreign background. Some students would be considered rich due to their ability to go abroad for study, and some would be deceived because of language gap. So the interview below shows some international students’ attitude toward their personal safety.

 When asking if they heard the news that a Japanese student was raped and killed by a taxi driver in Taiwan, Cheung Ming, a nineteen-year-old girl who came from Hong Kong, said, “No, I didn’t heard it before. But it sounds terrible. I would never take taxi alone at night. Moreover, I would avoid going out at night.” And when asking whether this kind of cases change their original intentions to come to Taiwan , compared to girls, Jaime Li, a twenty-year-old boy that came from Panama, was not afraid of these thing at all and expressed that terrible things happened everywhere.

  Relieved by the conclusion that horrible news wouldn't retreat international students from coming to Taiwan, Taiwanese can still be proud of having the reputation “Island of Tourism.” Not like some Chinese parents would be worried about their children’s safety and start to exclude some countries, Taiwan can still stand on their list. In addition, it also means we the Taiwanese should do our best to maintain this hard-earned status.

Advice from The Workshop

Grammer

0.returned students?
--> use "exchanged students" to avoid the transformation of proper nouns raising confusion 
1.it sound"s" terrible
2.a twenty-year-old boy that come from Panama, "was" not afraid about
3.It seemed easy for everyone to face these personal safety problems such as being targets of rascals,
-->"easy" instead of "possible"
-->being targets of "criminals"
4..Do Taiwan worth international students to choose to study?
-->IS Taiwan~~~
5..Jaime Li, a twenty-year-old boy that come from Panama, were not afraid "about"
-->were not Afraid "of"
6.Cheung Ming said what Taiwan attracted her was our cheaper tuition 
-->use "the" instead of "our" 
7.a twenty-year-old boy that come 
-->came
8.due to their crossing sea to come to another country,
-->due to their ability to go abroad for study
-->they are able to study abroad?
-->due to their economic factors?
9.U used "recently" to start, would u like to use the present progressive tense
in the whole article?
-->"The present progressive tense" accepted.

Structure and Position 

1.The form of reports couldn't use first-person narration,your article looks more like reflection not news.
2.Cheung Ming said what Taiwan attracted her was our cheaper tuition "so it didn't matter", 
-->It seems nothing to do with.
3.Except the cheap tuition,there is few traits of Taiwan. So the title is not so proper.
-->Will The Dangerous Cases Influence International Students' will to Study in Taiwan?

Do Taiwan worth international students to choose to study?

Most international students still gave positive evaluations to the social order of Taiwan. 

  Recently, more and more students chose to study abroad, and it raised a serious question about safety of returned students. It seemed easy for everyone to face these personal safety problems such as being targets of rascals, however, international students had more chances because of their foreign background. Some students would be considered rich due to their crossing sea to come to another country, and some would be deceived because of language gap. So I interviewed some international students to ask their attitude toward their personal safety.

  When I asked if they heard the news that a Japanese student was raped and killed by a taxi driver in Taiwan, Cheung Ming, a nineteen-year-old girl who come from Hong Kong, said, “No, I didn’t heard it before. But it sound terrible. I would never take taxi alone at night. Moreover, I would avoid going out at night.” Compared to girls, Jaime Li, a twenty-year-old boy that come from Panama, were not afraid about these thing at all. And I kept asking whether this kind of cases change their original intentions to come to Taiwan , Cheung Ming said what Taiwan attracted her was our cheaper tuition so it didn't matter, and Jaime indicated that terrible things happened everywhere, thus I concluded that they all tended to keep their choices.  
  After my interview, I was a little relieved that horrible news wouldn't retreat international students from coming to Taiwan, not like some Chinese parents would be worried about their children’s safety and start to exclude some countries. However, we still had to make effort to maintain social order to let more students or visitors to come safely.